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 Pre4Pepsi |
Lights break softly... |
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Posts: 2423 Nov 3, 2002 9:57 AM Big Jarlsberg
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Lights break softly on silky rain Luminescent beads beat dark sands into submission Each drop brings on a new shape that wasn't before We never keep anything we touch Shapes shift as they come into our grasp Humans destroy that which we don't understand And embrace change as though it were within our nature Awakening, the moon changes patiently Phases shift between new and old Just as everything begins, so it ends 11/2/02 |
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OdetteglDD |
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Posts: 673 Nov 3, 2002 5:31 PM BassGod Groupie #36
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That's beautiful Sunshine.
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jellybean75 |
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Posts: 0 Nov 3, 2002 8:12 PM PSBGG #8
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Quote:This is both beautiful and wise. Lovely poem. |
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Pre4Pepsi |
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Posts: 2423 Nov 3, 2002 8:44 PM Big Jarlsberg
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Thank you both for reading.
 I had a concept going with this one... the more I added to it, the more the concept became clear. Mostly about how objects and ideas change as soon as you touch or come into posession of them. You can't keep something that is unattainable in the first place. |
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jellybean75 |
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Posts: 0 Nov 3, 2002 9:05 PM PSBGG #8
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Don't I know that. I think you have captured that perfectly in this poem, Sunshine. I got that from it and it's made me think a lot since reading it. That is what good poetry does.
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Pre4Pepsi |
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Posts: 2423 Nov 3, 2002 9:18 PM Big Jarlsberg
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*blushes*
*kicks dirt* |
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Isashax |
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Posts: 1645 Nov 4, 2002 1:23 PM PSBGG #25
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That was awesome Sunshine, I love it
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